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What does this visualization (including caption) say about toxics?

Saturday, March 7, 2020 - 12:50pm

This visualization says that toxics are often purposely rendered invisible through discourse and imaginaries around places.

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Can you suggest ways to enrich this image to extend its ethnographic import?

Saturday, March 7, 2020 - 12:49pm

It would be beneficial if there was a way to enhance the image since it is slightly pixilated and difficult to read. Maybe also consider showing the step with the original statement, which might be a way to actually fully articulated everything your description says through the image itself.

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What kind of image is this? Is it a found image or created by the ethnographer (or a combination)? What is notable about its composition | scale of attention | aesthetic?

Saturday, March 7, 2020 - 12:45pm

This is a created image and is notable for producing a visualization of toxicity that is rendered invisible in the context of this project development. The image is creative and clearly articulates the message.

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Can you suggest ways to elaborate the caption of this visualization to extend its ethnographic message?

Saturday, March 7, 2020 - 12:42pm

Perhaps it could benefit from extending the discussion of this relationship between toxicity and invisibility.

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How does this visualization (including caption) advance ethnographic insight? What message | argument | sentiment | etc. does this visualization communicate or represent?

Saturday, March 7, 2020 - 12:36pm

This visualization is a means of rendering toxicity visible, which seen in relation to the other image of the language used by developers to obscure the toxic reality of the site is striking. 

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