I like it as it is. Perhaps I would try to combine this picture with a different one, not the “bodies in the water picture.” Both photos are great and make sense together. However, I think the author can be more playful with visibility and “focal points” and use a picture where the thermal power plant is in the front and fishing practices are in the background… out of focus, in the dark.
The image does a great job hinting at the fraught relation between fishermen and powerplant. The image could be contrasted with other shots at daylight, or with activities at the plant, to start including more perspectives.