Can you suggest ways to elaborate the caption of this visualization to extend its ethnographic message?

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Nadine Tanio's picture
February 26, 2020
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Oil

The caption layers multiple concept and ideas. It complicates my understanding of the inter-relationship between leisure (wetsuits) and industrial pollution. The connections drawn between surfing, male military personnel and the petrochemical industry were interesting if a little difficult to follow. I would love to see even more explicit connections made to the image

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